Category: Writers Block
The rain and wind captivate her.
The cool forest air entrances her.
Know what to beware as the dream finally ends,
the haunted reverie returns.
Cloked in the mists of it, her eyes hold fire.
Ready to battle it, her mind is clear.
And when the faces rise again;
when the voices call and plead,
she can't help but cry out in fear.
Echoing screams chill her blood
and she realizes then, that she's all alone.
Throwing her arms wide, dark eyes narrow in challenge.
The reverie possesses her and she falls to her knees.
Darkness, blackness; night has fallen.
Screaming, cursing; the fight begins again.
Hiding yet hearing, she cowers in terror.
For she knows all too well what comes next.
Numb and crying, she sits alone.
Though she'd always wished it, this wasn't right!
Laughter trills from somewhere close;
the hated sound of the victorious.
Silent fury hardens her heart
as she takes the stance of the warrior.
i like it haunted
awwwwww you liked it? cool. I actually don't mind telling what this one's about if anyone wants to know. It's not that bad, but yeah. See if you can guess though.
Hmm I see as a struggle with the sudden loss of sight...Brillant work.
Hmm I see as a struggle with the sudden loss of sight...Brillant work.
actually, the haunted reverie is a memory, the darkness blackness part and on from that is the memory of my parent's divorce. the laughter is from the mother. See, see how many interpretations can be gathered from just 1 poem?
Wow is all I can say. Great job! *Hugs,* Mel.
I was a tad too predictable ..smile but I see the meaning now..good job have you ever considered publishing your work..
Excellently written, and easily understood! You're right, there are an infinitesimal amount of interpretations!
I want a carear as an author and psychologist and yes, I've thought of publishing. you think it's that good? thanks! And, as for interpretations, it's only for the writer to know and or tell the true meaning. I'm glad yall liked it :)
hmmmm, I spelled career wrong
Ohh the writers habit of fiddling you'll end up fiddling more than Yehudi Menhuin..j/k. Honestly I think it's wonderful and good luck on the career which ever way you spell it..
It was wonderful!
awwwww, I like praise and yes yes yes, I'll read your stuff posted on the board here when I get a chance
what can i say about it? excellent! you done a good job. and yes, publish on it. keep move forward for the aim to be an author for psychologist
:) so much positivity! I love it! I'm glad yall think I'm that good, I've seen many poems on this board, by yall that are amazing too
I did suggest a book of collective poetry way back in the mists of time, and I still think that would be a great idea.
interesting. I'll post another poem... eventually. I'm working on 3 poems, a series of poems in a trilogy thing so, that'll be the next thing posted :)
greatness girl, wish have the cance to tal to you soon.